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Nanami七海
首先感謝回饋，老實說我也很不會寫回饋，總是詞窮ˊAˋ關於視角，我每一部作品都是這樣，一部作品會有至少三種視角(第三+各別主角)主要是我很喜歡寫第一人稱，寫角色碎碎念很有趣也很能貼近他的內心，可是也喜歡寫詩意語句可我又不能讓一個人獨白的時候內心唸詩，最終造就我整部視角會不固定在第一或第三甚至我同一篇章裡面，同時有三種視角切換
雖說切視角會造成混亂的可能，可角色本來就都是混亂的關係但謝謝你提出可能的疑慮，不過這還算是我刻意的範圍w我會思考看看該怎麼處理，兼顧角色內心+個人偏好的問題
再次感謝你的心得，也期待森林之約跟病嬌卡爾<3
7 months agoReply
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