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【林冽迅速"卸卸"下袖口內藏裝置】多字=>林冽迅速"卸"下袖口內藏裝置
【還快點過來包紥】少字、錯字=> 還"不"快點過來包"紮"
8 months agoReply
陳樺
謝謝你，我都沒發現我多打字跟錯字的部份，已改過。
8 months agoReply
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