A peaceful piece. I love how the moon feels like a comforting presence, a guide into sleep. The gentle words make it easy to picture the awe of the night. It's a lovely reminder of those precious moments we can appreciate. Thank you so much for your work!

Nice poem, but... “dream sway?” What is that? It sounds pretty, but it feels like you’re just throwing words together because they rhyme.

Still, It flows nicely tho🫰