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Endlessly（椋梧）
謝謝小夜的心得，感謝看得這麼認真仔細，有勞了。
1 month agoReply
星雨夜
蝦蝦客氣啦～～🫶
1 month agoReply
凌夏
讀完才發現打賞鍵被大大摳掉了😭
謝謝星雨夜的講評，因為我和蝦蝦都是經驗比較少並且每週更新的也很趕的人，所以很多缺陷我們沒辦法抓出來，而且大大講的好用心喔🥹好專業好有耐心，每一個細節都有注意到，甚至是還幫我們重新寫一篇範例，太感動了星雨夜大人ಥ_ಥ
我和蝦蝦會努力去改的！不會辜負你的用心！
1 month agoReply
星雨夜
沒關係，就是故意摳掉的🤣🤣🤣

感謝妳們給小夜一個機會啦，文章往往就是這樣，我也很難看清自己的問題，改別人的稿很簡單，改自己的比什麼都難XDDDD

很高興兩人還能合作至今，要磨合兩人的習性，這才是最困難的。一起加油啦！🫶
1 month agoReply
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