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原子能
這段寫得很好！男主慌到極點，最後竟然是靠打自己一拳冷靜下來，超有畫面感，這才叫真男人！比那些只會愣在原地的角色強太多了
8 months agoReply
守塔人
確實，真實情況大部分人都會愣著無法反應。
8 months agoReply
原子能

【難道是摔倒在地上的時"侯"】錯字=>時"候"
【初步檢查過她沒有明顯骨"析"】錯字=>骨"折"
【麻煩你們先在外面等"侯"】錯字=>等"候"
8 months agoReply
守塔人
感謝錯字提醒。
8 months agoReply
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