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Leigh-Andrew
Oh wow, this part was super vivid! Felt like you really painted a picture with the messhall, that green fire and just the scenery as a whole. Loved the interactions between Lidea and the people in the mess hall. Oh and that letter at the end! Super fascinating stuff!
Asmeon
Thank you! I have been trying to work on my descriptions, but I also had some fun in this chapter. From this chapter on, I'm finally getting to the meat of the story.
Leigh-Andrew
@Asmeon,Oh for sure, I can tell things are going to ramp up very soon, excited to read on!
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