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吳墨
這篇寫得我鼻血直流，突如其來的轉折，不會突兀，反而讓人會心一笑。
心裡甜甜蜜蜜的呢~（灑花
3 years agoReply
葦
好害羞啊有被墨墨大神批作業的fu！大神請忽略我的錯別字啊啊（扭動）
第一次寫GL我簡直在亂來w甜到你心就好了ww墨墨的文也好好看啦我特別喜歡最後的轉折，畫龍點睛之筆！我等下去留言讚美你！
3 years agoReply
紙兒
看了標題的我：大概是瘋子的愛情故事
看到結尾的我：一對笨蛋情侶

兩個人都好可愛w還有那個八個戒指的腦迴路也很讚w
3 years agoReply
葦
謝謝紙兒留言！真的就是一對笨蛋情侶而已www而且寫到差不多結尾其實我忘了戒指了，看回去才發現漏了一個元素，所以結局就用了戒指！ww
3 years agoReply
雨墨濂
你！GL!是我沒想到的XD甜甜的也很可愛阿，可以考慮長篇了
3 years agoReply
葦
對啊我也沒想到竟然獻出了GL處女作！是笨蛋美女妖怪X女友力爆棚的鋼鐵直女，寫得很快樂XD
3 years agoReply
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