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Miss Anderson
Idk if you found your outline, but keep writing anyway! The story still has good flow
Soulfulwriter
No, I just went with my gut on it.
Miss Anderson
I love this! You say that her mom had four more kids with leo, do you mean three? Justin, Lane, and Chichi, right?
Soulfulwriter
Yes, Sorry. Or maybe she lost one. AHhhh
Miss Anderson
@Soulfulwriter, hmmm okay lol, good mystery added, can't wait to see where it goes
Soulfulwriter
@Miss Anderson, I try to keep the reader on their toes. Hopefully, this one will go on amazon as well.
Miss Anderson
@Soulfulwriter, oh woow, as in publishing? Let me know if you do! I would totally buy it
Soulfulwriter
@Miss Anderson, I will. I already have a few books on there.
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