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悠波（Yuippoi）
同為兔子的悠波感到：怕爆
2 years agoReply
W.H.
😆😆😆😂😂😂🤧🤧🤧

笑著笑著就哭了⋯⋯
2 years agoReply
李誠金
好勁爆的劇情，愛老師的兔子最後走向條不歸路，用隱晦的詞來寫簡單易懂的東西👍
2 years agoReply
W.H.
謝謝誠金😍😍😍

我午夜三點開寫，本來只想寫 30 來行，沒想到越寫越長，總共寫了 101 行， 寫到四點半，後來還睡不著，只好下午補眠。

回到詩的內容：太執著的人很辛苦，放過別人也是放過自己；還有，某些人會拿虛擬的紅蘿蔔去驅使別人為其做事，不管是不是刻意，保持距離比較好。

其實，我比較同情故事詩裡的男學生啦，但自殘確實不對，這是文學渲染的手法，也為了呈現「紅 vs. 白」的戲劇效果～
2 years agoReply
凌曉潔
這個故事真是多方大悲劇，對老師也好，學生也好，眼鏡男也好，婚紗店也好……
2 years agoReply
W.H.
我覺得婚紗店，最慘😭

不過有讀者覺得是黑色幽默，我後來重讀也有這種感覺：

https://www.penana.com/article/1375683

(請看留言區～
2 years agoReply
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