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寂魚
 評分：A

聞香而至，隔著螢幕卻如能真的感覺到那一飲的舒暢
10 months agoReply
存在
評分：A
10 months agoReply
虛冲
評分：A

有釀就乾一杯吧！
10 months agoReply
凶讀
有感而發，當初一起玩創挑的人，現在少了真多。雖然創挑一樣熱鬧，暑期日更一樣多人，不過少掉的風景也是永遠少了，這個世界不會等人，新的風景不斷來到，只有記憶會保留下來。
10 months agoReply
寂魚
-----2025.8.4-----
10 months agoReply
凶讀
？？？
10 months agoReply
戀嬿紅唇
評分：Ｂ

評語：

詩的意象感覺得出是以過去跟現在做對照，

在最後的收尾呈現出淡淡的哀傷。
10 months agoReply
凶讀
總覺得最後一句跟前一句缺一個遞進，轉得硬了點
10 months agoReply
戀嬿紅唇
@凶讀,

可以再補個實際景象去做對照嗎?
10 months agoReply
凶讀
@戀嬿紅唇,恩，就這樣改！
10 months agoReply
戀嬿紅唇
@凶讀,完整多了~
10 months agoReply
凶讀
@戀嬿紅唇,恩 又偷改了一個字 剛剛太倉卒了XDDD

感謝，剛剛寫完就一直覺得結尾轉得太突兀
10 months agoReply
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