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森羽
那個我可能會作為目前正在寫的小說的衍生後續，我一直以來都在同一篇故事，只不過還要很久才寫的完，所以這種因興趣寫的，要等到寫完這篇後才做打算
5 years agoReply
塔爾文
你好啊森羽，先謝謝你參與這個創挑活動！

我覺得你寫得不錯啊！給自己一點信心吧！我覺得你這篇文章可以繼續延伸下去，那個夢裡的女生到底是誰？跟那個主角有什麼關係才突然出現在他的夢中？為什麼主角見到他才會產生情感？這篇文章裏有很多伏筆可以繼續寫下去呢！一篇文章最重要是可以創造一些伏筆去吸引人看下去，你做到這一點是非常好啦！加油加油！
5 years agoReply
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