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莉莉歐
你好，先恭喜你的作品出版順利@@ 

與樓上的朋友一樣想法，我有些擔心你的句讀方式和「……」（刪節號）的用法，不僅在內文表現上會稍缺力道之外，也會讓讀者在閱讀上產生一些困惑，但若那確實是你語意和內容的表現方式，以及讀者在這方面沒有問題的話，可不必太在意我這條意見～

祝一切安好。

5 years agoReply
初九
少數句子後面沒有標點符號，是刻意的嗎？

繼續加油哦～
6 years agoReply
謝謝哦！查看了一下部分真的漏了，部分故意的。
6 years agoReply
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