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什比亞
好的...謝謝評解！我知道下次怎麼改了，辛苦大大了！
8 years agoReply
師傅
不客氣，我不是大大啊hah
請再接再勵（笑）
8 years agoReply
師傅
把「交換」的創意性發揮得淋漓盡致。這點我很佩服。
故事也有新意。但是結構有點薄弱混亂，讓人第一遍看有點理不清故事脈絡。
8 years agoReply
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