YES. You took a risk here having her father show up right after her conversation with Viktor about him. I'd like it to pay off, but the story feels suddenly rushed, and I know you're dying to tell us more, but don't jeapordize the pace for this
I think it was the combination of "The best thing my father ever did for us was go to war," and then the moment of, SURPRISE! Look who's back! If that makes any sense haha
Ah! Ok. Yeah I can see that. I just wanted to make sure the audience remembered that he had been captured as a POW. Did you remember without the reminder?
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You took a risk here having her father show up right after her conversation with Viktor about him. I'd like it to pay off, but the story feels suddenly rushed, and I know you're dying to tell us more, but don't jeapordize the pace for this
but out of curiosity, what felt rushed?
If that makes any sense haha