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看到最新進度。

感覺主角是個很累的隊長。儘管PTSD很嚴重，加上身體的勞累，但是巨獸出現時，還是義無反顧回復原職，帶領小隊上戰場對上巨獸。

整體氣氛渲染很好，有環太平洋的豪邁感覺。而主角的巨大機器人與巨獸的厚重、龐大感表現得很有畫面。
2 days agoReply
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謝謝您的心得，環太平洋的怪獸和機甲是開啟我寫作念頭的源頭，希望有朝一日能完成故事，再次謝謝您的撥冗閱讀和想法。
2 days agoReply
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