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凝雨 sponsored 1000coins for Issue 15!
設定弱手路過🐰
能夠以繪師角度分析作品，這個切入點很有趣啊！另外，妳讓我想起自己的故事設定有多弱，嗚嗚嗚嗚嗚…… 總之看完這篇我獲益良多呢！
1 day agoReply
皮皮
兔兔的設定有一點讓我印象深刻，每個腳色的選擇，都關乎其他腳色或是因果的代價，比如酒館老闆娘最後被挖眼睛也是ouo
1 day agoReply
凝雨
@皮皮,艾娜沒被挖眼睛，而是另一個連名字也沒有但同樣擁有紫眸的女角被挖😆
另外，一說因果關係，其實之後康納會被露絲支解完全是由於卡蘭做了某件事🤣🤣🤣
1 day agoReply
溫水天荷
謝謝皮皮用心的評價ouo，畢竟首部曲是我兩年前多寫的，用詞多少會不成熟。至於轉折方面等，能理解你說的，心情不會不好。
1 day agoReply
皮皮
同為繪師，我可以同理被說描述比較用力，因為我之前也經歷過一陣子quq
謝謝水荷兄，很棒的作品!
1 day agoReply
溫水天荷
@皮皮,謝謝喜歡。
1 day agoReply
溫水天荷 sponsored 2800coins for Issue 15!
1 day agoReply
皮皮
謝謝水荷兄ouop
1 day agoReply
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