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諾蒂西亞
我很抱歉！
7 months agoReply
星野維
感謝大大的心得，看來我還得再多練呢！
不過這邊我向針對開頭的部分做說明。不揭示長相其實是刻意寫出的伏筆。
不過看來是弄巧成拙了呢😅😅
7 months agoReply
falabilaba
應該說，留點線索給讀者去猜她是誰。她讓我有一種很重要的人物，可是後面都沒有描述她相關的情節。
7 months agoReply
falabilaba
@falabilaba,介紹你作品，<誰才是文>https://www.manhuagui.com/comic/44528/
7 months agoReply
星野維
@falabilaba,主要是我還沒寫到，不過我會多做留意。
7 months agoReply
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