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AnFr安鍅
（拖了超級無敵久的東西）評語：這個片段超有生活感！雨後夏天的夜晚、吹風抽煙的細節讓人很容易進入主角的情緒裡——孤單、思索、微微惆悵，又帶點小叛逆感。你對環境和心理的描寫很細膩，像是把讀者拉到現場跟他一起感受那份微涼。
8 months agoReply
魚
『拖了很久的傢伙來了.極度不專業評語』

感覺像還沒結束的故事，青春總有無限的好奇想嘗試——
人們的故事還在繼續
9 months agoReply
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