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感謝大大的評論
設定之初我把莉莉所處的陣營定義為「邪教」，所以就順著自己對邪教的印象來推演後續的設定，大概是這樣
如此聽來，文筆跟流暢度方面感覺沒啥問題，就是劇情可能要看能否被接受...我大致上理解大大的意思，再度感謝大大的評論
8 months agoReply
阿隕
就是現在未成年性侵的問題逐漸被看見，如果有描寫這種劇情的很容易被撻伐
8 months agoReply
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