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原子能
【路卡揮動手柄，有一根鐵棒從手柄彈出，手柄變成了約半米長的棍棒】這是像甩棍從一邊彈出，還是像如意金箍棒一樣從兩側彈出？

【路卡按下按鈕，棍棒果然變回了手柄，路卡放到口袋。】看來是像甩棍從一邊彈出了。就像光劍一樣。
6 months agoReply
對酒當歌
對~就像光劍一樣
但可惜我的能力未能寫得更好>.<
6 months agoReply
原子能
@對酒當歌,別這樣說，我也寫不出來，這很難形容的，你寫的很好了.

6 months agoReply
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