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貓仙翁
據史載，魔尊虛清揚棄道法、逆倫常、妄亂天，引來玄帝將之誅殺於斷天峰下。魔之將死，放四魔歸於諸天萬界。
改順一點，如果能再多一點逼格高的資訊，例如：玄帝引動九天翔龍，天地具震，使出絕天滅地斬仙滅佛無赦大破界滅龍渾天絕殺之天地一瞬妄斷天機之拌42號混凝土之義大利麵
這樣整個逼格又更高了
3 years agoReply
萌鼠
萌鼠曰：「吾自覺慚愧。貓仙翁，其奶當世大才！其那拌４２號混凝土之義大利麵，深植人心！！！」
3 years agoReply
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