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aefadawsd

That first paragraph though... It's intriguing, I like it.

9 years agoReply

Cherry_Lover

Haha, thank you! Took me whole five minutes to write XD

9 years agoReply

Ooh, intense! A little more than the two paragraphs, but impressive nonetheless.

9 years agoReply

Cherry_Lover

Thank you ! And not to be rude or anything but if we merge the last one line sentences it'll end up as one paragraph:)

I gave the spacing to give a little extra effect:)

9 years agoReply

@Cherry_Lover, You're welcome!
No, no that's absolutely fine. You have used the spacing well. :)

9 years agoReply

UnseelieSidhe

Scary, I like it :)

9 years agoReply

Cherry_Lover

Thank you, I try:)

9 years agoReply

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