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愛野美子
原來男女之事可以那麼神聖…
4 years agoReply
鎮遠
神聖是不至於啦，男女主角一開始心思都不純正。但以我看十八禁書(好孩子不要學) 多年的經驗，床戲能不能讓讀者有"感覺"，最重要的是前面的鋪陳，有沒有寫出男女主感情發展是很自然地到了這一步。
4 years agoReply
愛野美子
@鎮遠,以我看書的經驗，為了看肉會跳過很多細節，所以長篇肉戲稍微像這樣藝術一點比較好。
4 years agoReply
鎮遠
@爱野美子, 每位讀者的口味不盡相同，我自己是不會寫純肉文，希望喜歡看 18 禁床戲的讀者不會覺得本文太清淡。 
4 years agoReply
愛野美子
@鎮遠,所以我寫的都不是那種肉文(T_T)
而且都是食物代替…若太純覺得太噁心了。
4 years agoReply
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