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金無
看到的時候就覺得這篇文很好，投到「離開」的主題那邊更合適。
4 years agoReply
二木人
真的！開心令你有感觸。其實那邊我也有投。

https://www.penana.com/story/76711/消逝集-粵語有聲書-podcast/issue/12


但由於只能投一篇，你覺得那一篇比較合適？請給我點意見。🙇🏻
4 years agoReply
金無
老實說,兩篇優點不同,這篇勝在故事結構,另一篇其實我先前就看過了,勝在文辭優美,年紀少一點的時候,會喜歡文辭優美的文,年紀多一點時,覺得能把故事說好的作者了不起,所以我的意見是,請先參考你要投的主題的審評年齡與喜好,希望這結論有點用處。^^ 
@二木人,
4 years agoReply
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