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Okay. First things first, I currently don't know what to feel about Rick's situation being treated like it was a Plot Twist. It rubs me off the wrong way when people use that thing as some plot device.
But I can definitely see and understand why it was written in this manner. And the very first reasoning I got was that we are following the story in Puck's perspective. Puck, who seems to be more interested in his own affairs and his love for Nova, would definitely be caught by a surprise. And two, I can't say that you should have hinted this for a long time, because there is no way you can tell someone is one, just by pointing out very trivial stuff.
So my final word for this recent chapter is that I am happy that you really moved Rick forward in terms of character and plot. And I am glad there is a roadtrip happening.
I feel like I'm rambling right now so I'll just go ahead and say what I wanted to say : It's good that you've concluded the part with Rick because most of the times it was always Puck and Nova so I'm glad that the attention was brought to him. Love how some of the events in this chapter was unexpected (to me atleast, in the case of Rick and the moving away part)
I'm looking forward to their road trip! :D