Well first off, The voice issue is getting confusing as we have ZERO idea where it comes from and its hard to keep track of.

Secondly there are WAAAY TOO many plot twists, leaving unanswered questions in everyone's minds and see too much of anything is bad. Its okay to keep readers in suspense, But with so many twists its hard to understand who is good and who is bad and leaves a rather vague understanding of each chapter.