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NaNa☆
那個表情符號太出戲了啦看到一半笑了出來。
2 months agoReply
誌陳
超讚的，我當初寫的時候也一直想笑。
用來表示被揍到說不出話的感覺，意外蠻有趣的。
2 months agoReply
一個平凡的住院醫師
第二獵在整體節奏上算是一個銜接第三獵的過度章節，但是在過程中卻繼續塑造出男主陰沉戲謔的性格以及側面烘托出其他配角，不論是外遇學長、小三或是八卦仔的人物形象。

本段落整體的亮點在於男女主角既合作又互相堤防的對話，頗有昭和時期的歡喜冤家浪漫感，而男主角卻毫無自知，令人期待這段契約將如何發展。

然後這個餐點售價我喜歡，讓我想個老笑話：
兩個笨蛋會一起死（87+87=174）
2 months agoReply
漫予
這兩份套餐實在太好笑了😂😂
3 months agoReply
誌陳
哼哼，搞笑可是我的專長（誤
3 months agoReply
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