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夜沐
會不會到最後跟小雨在一起了。(X

鍾禾央是新角色嗎？怎麼不記得他有出現過，如果真的沒有，那就是跟銀翊翔的情況一樣，突然冒出來的角色或人名，卻用一種很熟悉的敘述方式，會令讀者錯亂。畢竟有些劇情可能作者本人腦中有資訊，卻忘記把訊息交代給讀者，會讓看的人一頭霧水。

不過並不是什麼太大的問題，只是稍微提一下ww
4 months agoReply
沐紫藜
我有空回頭再修正XD
現在不想陷進去這個故事裡QQ

是說，我覺得跟小雨在一起也很不錯，哈哈
4 months agoReply
夜沐
@沐紫藜
阿賀，怎麼聽起來不是好結局🥲
4 months agoReply
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