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我為九斗米折腰
比較了兩篇，這篇確實比較亂，情節雖然豐富，但卻沒有修改後那版的『冷』。

完整版的單竹影，有一種看透一切『冷』、『無情』、與『透徹』，這版卻多了『驚慌』與『凡俗氣』，相較起來，折腰比較喜歡修改後的單竹影的情緒。
5 months agoReply
祿思Luz
嗯嗯！我想先把腦海裡的想法寫出來，後面開始進行精修。感謝折腰的喜歡和想法分享～
對我來說是真的很大的鼓勵ヾ(´︶`*)ﾉ♬ 
5 months agoReply
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