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AnFr安鍅
（拖了超級無敵久的東西）評語：整篇讀下來超有畫面感！夏染一開始的反感很真實，能感受到那種「被別人的生活刺眼」的無奈，然後慢慢被病榻少女和她的柔聲歌聲打動，情感遞進自然。風鈴的象徵用得很棒，每次響起都像是一段記憶的呼喚，結尾淡淡哀傷又溫暖，讀者會有一種「哎呀，這就是青春裡的美好與無奈吧」的感覺。
8 months agoReply
魚
『拖了很久的傢伙來了.極度不專業評語』

掛起的是他人的願望，還是自我的愧疚？
希望和夢想，似乎也在某一刻被人肯定了

（腦死亡金魚
9 months agoReply
Fattty
評審辛苦了!
9 months agoReply
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