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AnFr安鍅
評語：好幸福的一首詩。

羽辰的詩比較偏散文了，嗯嗯……怎麼說呢？

其實可以試著縮短句子，在用詞上可以更精簡一點！

整體而言，情緒的感染力很強，有感覺到主角的幸福感，很HE～
1 year agoReply
羽辰
嗯嗯，感謝評語🤩🤩🤩
1 year agoReply
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