This piece is a striking reflection of the lingering pain of lost love. I love the haunting atmosphere. The line "A thousand stars could light the skies, Yet none would dry these weary eyes" is BEAUTIFUL! SUPERB! This sorrow is skillfully portrayed, and your words leave a lasting impression. Thank you so much for sharing!

❤️‍🔥I could feel the narrator’s pain, and the rhyme scheme holds up nicely, though it’s a bit predictable at times❤️‍🔥