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奈兔工造
整篇看下來我覺得用「......」來斷句用太多了
9 years agoReply
七日夏
完全變成我所說的"單純的招式展示"了，而且主角也太囉唆，這是戰鬥不是嘴砲啊！更何況比起前面的畏縮怯戰，後面那逼格滿點的個性到底是鬧哪樣啊！根本意義不明啊我說

抱歉，我知道我說話很直接，但我沒有惡意
9 years agoReply
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