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Comments - 後悔做渣男的我意外地捲入了九十九個往生考驗 | Penana

Comments - 後悔做渣男的我意外地捲入了九十九個往生考驗

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我覺得作者設想的劇情不錯，也覺得文筆方面可以再更好一點，所以加油

2 weeks agoReply

非常感謝！🙏🙏

2 weeks agoReply

@古潮兒,我覺得有些地方描述得太快，比如說反派死得這部分，反而覺得很可惜，情緒上也可以處理得更細膩一點，才更能讓讀者深入劇情中(這只是我的感想，沒有冒犯的意思)

2 weeks agoReply

@燕燕,沒問題，燕燕能夠以讀者角度揣摩角色的情緒，使我更深入了解一般人的看法😘

2 weeks agoReply

@古潮兒,👍

2 weeks agoReply

白桵 sponsored 500 for Issue 139!

3 months agoReply

感謝支持！🙏🙏🙏

3 months agoReply

夢斷魂勞唸的時候有點轉不過來，差點舌頭打結。
大大的小說我會找時間看完，您的作品料多味美……

9 months agoReply

感謝支持！如改夢斷魂消好不好？🙏🙏

9 months agoReply

@古潮兒,這個夢斷魂消倒是順了點，大大喜歡就好了^^

9 months agoReply

@花閱絹,感謝！👍🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

9 months agoReply

好睇緊張、幽默、峰迴路轉

9 months agoReply

感謝温兄支持！🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

9 months agoReply

恭喜完結！！

9 months agoReply

感謝77支持！😊

9 months agoReply

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