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溫水天荷 sponsored 2000coins for Issue 139!
恭喜完結！從我剛進來蕉園，追了兩年多的開祖作品之一。
3 months agoReply
古潮兒
感謝温水大大支持！你的鼓勵是我創作的原動力！🥰
3 months agoReply
燕燕
我覺得作者設想的劇情不錯，也覺得文筆方面可以再更好一點，所以加油
2 years agoReply
古潮兒
非常感謝！🙏🙏
2 years agoReply
燕燕
@古潮兒,我覺得有些地方描述得太快，比如說反派死得這部分，反而覺得很可惜，情緒上也可以處理得更細膩一點，才更能讓讀者深入劇情中(這只是我的感想，沒有冒犯的意思)
2 years agoReply
古潮兒
@燕燕,沒問題，燕燕能夠以讀者角度揣摩角色的情緒，使我更深入了解一般人的看法😘
2 years agoReply
燕燕
@古潮兒,👍
2 years agoReply
白桵 sponsored 500coins for Issue 139!
2 years agoReply
古潮兒
感謝支持！🙏🙏🙏
2 years agoReply
夢斷魂勞唸的時候有點轉不過來，差點舌頭打結。
大大的小說我會找時間看完，您的作品料多味美……
2 years agoReply
古潮兒
感謝支持！如改夢斷魂消好不好？🙏🙏
2 years agoReply
@古潮兒,這個夢斷魂消倒是順了點，大大喜歡就好了^^
2 years agoReply
古潮兒
@花閱絹,感謝！👍🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️
2 years agoReply
溫
好睇 緊張、幽默、峰迴路轉
2 years agoReply
古潮兒
感謝温兄支持！🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️
2 years agoReply
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