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7千字濃縮一句，那不就變成"大綱"，叉叉跟圈圈打了一架？有點抓不準，要濃縮到那種程度讀者才會覺的剛好。可能要自己多看幾篇別人的作品，當自己覺得過了時，趕緊筆記，為什麼會覺得多了，才能有所體會。
1 month agoReply
菜根
只能說那會是一個很玄妙的過程。

後來我仔細看了看，大部分我會刪除的過去段落，有些是水很多字數的部分，也就是它沒有任何的意義、劇情的意義在上面。

但當初，我會覺得那很有意義，所以硬是把它保留，也就是我目前在修的一二冊內容@@

只能說，那真的算是一個成長之後的變化。
1 month agoReply
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