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星無繁
感謝評論！
簡短說一說，很多指出的問題都是刻意為之的😗（封面、第一人稱）但要對上電波的確有點難度😅

不過，劇情和人設方面的確有所不足🥺會繼續努力！

接下來的評論也要加油噢！😁
9 months agoReply
韓麥可
文筆沒什麼問題基本上就比較容易改進，然後刻意為之的部分就把我的評論當參考就好了。
9 months agoReply
星無繁
@韓麥可,感謝！
9 months agoReply
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