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零器
「報告」其實有好幾種意思，除了文本類型，可以是口頭報告，甚至可以是士兵向司令匯報的用詞，「報告！敵軍......」
可以嘗試把元素以場景或其他方式帶出，不一定要是物品。
6 years agoReply
星塵
我不是很滿意自己的發揮。
之後會重寫一次，到時候會重新加上「報告」元素上去～
6 years agoReply
JC+
其實我覺得多一點行為/表情的形容
白小花就不會變得很渣呢！
6 years agoReply
星塵
不，設定是白小花是渣的🙈
形容得越多她越渣😳
6 years agoReply
JC+
@星塵,原來是想她變渣wwwwww
6 years agoReply
星塵
@風JC+,渣才容易寫嘛～
不渣的話比較困難，需要用非常長的篇幅去寫。
無奈之下只能讓白小花渣了🙈
6 years agoReply
JC+
@星塵,可憐了葉小風wwww
6 years agoReply
星塵
@風JC+,他應該不會再被拒絕了🤔
因為重寫不會涉及到表白了🙈
6 years agoReply
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