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艾瑞卡(Erica)
題材很不錯！(≧▽≦)

但，如果你要形容一種感覺，盡量不要直接寫出感覺。盡量形容出害怕的環境，或用不同言語來表達，比如「救救我」之類的。

就是形容出感覺讓讀者知道你在害怕。盡量不要直接說出來「我害怕」，這樣對營造氣氛會比較好喔！

寫作愉快！(≧▽≦)
7 years agoReply
梧杺.
好唷，謝謝指教♡我的文還有超級多進步空間XD 這個主題很有趣，寫的很開心( ´▽` )
7 years agoReply
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