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簡潔
感激大俠提點，待我去學它一學，感激！
7 years agoReply
霧飄山亭
描寫得满好的喔！而且連寫三段，有種特別的風味！

其實平仄沒太難啦XD以粤語九聲來說1、4聲便平、其他7聲便是仄…有懷疑查查字典便可…
7 years agoReply
簡潔
喔。。。查到了"一品紅"本身已經不合平仄了，嘻嘻^^"
不過謝謝你~
7 years agoReply
簡潔
哈哈。。。實在是這樣。
7 years agoReply
零兒
呃咳....雖然一口氣寫了三段，頗會描寫的，但沒有平仄就很難說了。
7 years agoReply
簡潔
平仄。。。。應該有差池的，都怪我上課不用功。。。
獻醜了。
7 years agoReply
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