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車有木
感謝參加，以下為我的一些感想，非專業評論，看看便可：

從這篇七言律詩，能看出作者的文學涵養，不僅運用了許多平時不常見的字詞，也多使用譬喻與轉化，讓詩作增添許多古典色彩。(有種感覺作者是否很愛武俠類小說，詩風有些類似。)

文末提了一句深得人心得抱怨，也能看出作者對於夏天的感受為何，由此再回頭看全詩，則又有不同於原先的感受，似乎傘成了救贖、蒸氣是烈陽的懲罰，頗為生趣。
2 days agoReply
冷知識魔人
文從時亦，不勝往時，早已非過去的那麼厲害，藏頭藏尾亦無人問聞，不如以往已！
1 day agoReply
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