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莉卡莉卡
本人確實挺喜歡寫互動的，每次都只是想透過對話推進一下劇情，然後就莫名其妙越寫越多了～
2 months agoReply
幻空燕

原來如此～
你的對話都很有趣，一般想透過對話推進劇情，有時候會出現對話冗長或無聊的情況，但你目前沒有，基本上每句話大部分都有展現出有趣，可能是腦中的傾訴欲和素材夠多？

莫名其妙越寫越多的話？那你寫對話應該心情上覺得很有趣？
2 months agoReply
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