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黑正
若能將視角集中在主角身上，感覺會更好讀🤔
4 months agoReply
CF LAM
係, 想寫多線, 但功力唔夠......
4 months agoReply
CF LAM
多謝, 真的怕寫不好。舖陳不夠又怕不合理地突兀，太多又怕冗長沉悶，好似現在就是。
5 months agoReply
華王子
冇問題呀，寫自己鍾意嘅嘢就可以
小說世界就係一個咁嘅地方
5 months agoReply
CF LAM
@華王子,多謝！畢竟寫得小說，都想吸引更多讀者。無理由不從讀者角度考慮，咁樣太自私。


但自己有返咁上下年紀，亦明白唔係為他人而活。

難點就係，點樣平衡兩者。。。作為新手，要向你哋呢啲前輩學嘢。
5 months agoReply
星野維
期待機甲出現
5 months agoReply
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