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醉曲
評語
我：劇情和文筆都相當優秀，個人認為是有利冠軍候補
爺爺：劇情很符合我爺爺的胃口，但也可能是因為這樣他蠻認真審視文筆的，他認為有些地方的文筆有待加強，但還是給予高評價
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感謝你們的評語！
1 year agoReply
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