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原子能
這個副本的後記寫得真好，解釋了瘋子（御）的行為動機，原來他是為了村民解脫才犧牲自己。這讓御的形象不只是一個瘋批鬼怪，多了層悲劇英雄的色彩。
7 months agoReply
鮪魚壽司
感謝！😭😭🫶
7 months agoReply
原子能

【因為"會也"損靈氣】錯字=>因為"也會"損靈氣
【誤入歧途的道人而"以"】錯字=>"而已"
【"瘋迷"整個遊戲界】錯字=>"風靡"
7 months agoReply
鮪魚壽司
有錯字、建議或覺得唐突奇怪都能在這裡告訴作者！
1 year agoReply
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