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線條會跳舞
一口氣看到這兒，酣暢淋漓。
故事像下坡大石、越滾越快，鏡頭感十足，似乎社會一角肯定發生過這樣的事，看著忍不住為陳素心焦。
期待下一篇發布！
3 years agoReply
雷又生
謝謝你的支持！因為之後劇情會愈來愈奇幻，所以我選擇比較寫實的基調，起初構思時只想寫出身為女生的恐懼，沒預料到陳素的遭遇會那麼沉重。希望隨着故事發展下去，我也繼續進步。
3 years agoReply
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