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故事雖能剛好斷字在1500的地方,卻唯獨可惜內容性讀來不順暢與較少帶入感,這是較為嚴重的事情。
聖誕老人理應出現在冬季,而非夏季,這也是另一個原因。
希望如果有機會,還能再重新謄寫,相信一定會有更好的表現。
但也因為有這樣的設定
才讓孩子們
有著無限的想像
中秋節快樂~