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淺初清璃
謝謝你的意見
4 years agoReply
浅眠
图片超漂亮的！文也不错！但你在那个心跳声那里可以加点东西

比如：我紧张的不行，心脏一下又一下地大声且快速地撞击着我的肋骨，等待着他的答案。

就是这样，你写的很好哦~
4 years agoReply
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