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啊仪
雖然我不認識vivy，不過我突然想起gundam seed裡的粉色頭髮的女主xDD
末日前，有首歌陪伴自己也不孤單了xD
4 years agoReply
宅仔
沒聽過欸，動畫嗎還是電影
4 years agoReply
啊仪
@宅仔,很久的動漫了，是高達系列的，那位女主也是用歌聲來療愈世界。就很像我沒聽過vivy這樣🤣🤣
4 years agoReply
夢塵
看的出來是想要寫出vivy的感覺XDD

不過確實感覺差了一點，我覺得或許能嘗試將末日的景色寫得更細緻一些，對應出與末日風格不一樣的歌聲，可能會比較好（？

我也不肯定就是了www
4 years agoReply
宅仔
就是歌聲跟歌詞這部分把我難倒了🤣
4 years agoReply
夢塵
@宅仔,這也真的是沒辦法了XD
這是真的難啊www
4 years agoReply
宅仔
@夢塵,想了快兩個小時，還是只能先將就這樣xd,不過也算是新嘗試，沒寫過有加歌詞的
4 years agoReply
夢塵
@宅仔,有新嘗試就是好事了！一定會慢慢進步的～
4 years agoReply
宅仔
話說最後那邊有辦法想像出唱歌的畫面嗎，還是沒感覺
4 years agoReply
夢塵
@宅仔,我覺得可以，不過印象不算太深刻
4 years agoReply
宅仔
@夢塵,歌詞跟心境應該都不夠，了解~
4 years agoReply
夢塵
@宅仔,加油～
4 years agoReply
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