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介鶴吉
好吧，老實說一開始我看不太懂，也大概反覆讀了至少十次，依舊不懂（我替自己的智商擔憂
但經過阿墨的解釋，確實是細思極恐啊！
我不知道有哪裡可以跟出建議，做得好xD
5 years agoReply
謝謝♥️
5 years agoReply
癇派 ⍢⃝و sponsored 100coins for Issue 12!
謝謝大大的建議與願意修改！
喜歡這篇喔，感謝你的參與！( *´◒`*)
5 years agoReply
♥️♥️♥️
5 years agoReply
癇派 ⍢⃝و
我很喜歡這篇，不過很可惜的是內容好像太長了QQ
如果可以修改、濃縮成兩句話更好（詳見創挑規則）！謝謝你的參與！
5 years agoReply
已修改。我覺得題目有點不清晰，「多段」這個字沒有明確定義。例如篇章一的第一句就已經段了四句。
5 years agoReply
癇派 ⍢⃝و
@舒雷文, 好的那我再是情況修改規範，順便依現在的規範回去一一抓錯，感恩你哦哦！
5 years agoReply
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