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不日的基特
這標題名哈哈🙈
7 years agoReply
兀心
作者的惡趣味表露無遺（艸
7 years agoReply
小歐
感覺超不行的呶ww但是不小心就點進來了呶
7 years agoReply
不日的基特
@小歐,哈哈哈哈，笑死，標題一股騷氣~
7 years agoReply
小歐
@野原小基特.,很母體ww呶呶呶
7 years agoReply
天照犬神
以時間順序回溯還真是很有意思。而且嚴格來說這不算是黑的黑歷史了，描寫還是很棒，09年的也不錯。2011年那個《拼圖》不知為何戳中我笑點😂，還有《7》那篇，也有種讓人忍不住一笑的衝動。整體來看你放的幾篇年代比較久遠的，動作場景都佔了很大比例，你對於動作描寫的掌控看得出來真的有在隨著年月不停的進步。
7 years agoReply
兀心
我倒著貼就是要反襯以前寫得有多爛......結果2009年那篇大大居然還吃得下去嗎！？我都已經準備好要被笑的說，大大尼也太好心了ＸＤＤＤ

小時候很愛看打架的東西，所以寫來寫去都狠重武戲吧。寫到《拳眾》時自己終於審美疲勞，才比較收斂些ＸＤ


7 years agoReply
天照犬神
@兀心,拼圖比較好笑，還有7😂動作戲寫得好其實很厲害的一個長處，我看到大部分新手一般都不擅長動作描寫。
7 years agoReply
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